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You have received an email from a friend from an English speaking country, Patrick, who wants to find a summer job in your country.

You have received an email from a friend from an English speaking country, Patrick, who wants to find a summer job in your country. AgV3e

Dear Patrick, It is great to receive your email. I am sory i couldn’t reply to your earlier because I have been really busy recently. I am glad when you chose my country to spend your summer. In my opinion, It's a fantastic approach to strengthen your understanding of my country's language. In my nation, supermarkets and restaurants are frequently recruiting. As a result, I believe your experience will provide you with several chances. I think you should work as a restaurant waiter. It will assist you in communicating with a large number of people while also helping you to enhance your language skills. Although these occupations don't pay a lot of money, It's still enough to make ends meet. Come to my house if you don't have a place to stay. I'd welcome the chance to talk with you. See you soon.

Dear Patrick,

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I am glad when you chose my country to spend your summer. In my opinion, It's a fantastic approach to strengthen your understanding of my country's language.

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people
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make
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meet
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 if you don't have a place to stay. I'd welcome the chance to talk with you.

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soon
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