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You have received an email from a friend from an English speaking country, Patrick, who wants to find a summer job in your country.

You have received an email from a friend from an English speaking country, Patrick, who wants to find a summer job in your country. AgV3e
Dear Patrick, It is great to receive your email. I am sory i couldn’t reply to your earlier because I have been really busy recently. I am glad when you chose my country to spend your summer. In my opinion, It's a fantastic approach to strengthen your understanding of my country's language. In my nation, supermarkets and restaurants are frequently recruiting. As a result, I believe your experience will provide you with several chances. I think you should work as a restaurant waiter. It will assist you in communicating with a large number of people while also helping you to enhance your language skills. Although these occupations don't pay a lot of money, It's still enough to make ends meet. Come to my house if you don't have a place to stay. I'd welcome the chance to talk with you. See you soon.
Dear Patrick,

It is great to receive your email. I am
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sory
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i
couldn’t reply to your earlier
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because
I have been
really
busy recently.

I am glad when you chose my country to spend your summer. In my opinion, It's a fantastic approach to strengthen your understanding of my country's language.

In my nation, supermarkets and restaurants are
frequently
recruiting.
As a result
, I believe your experience will provide you with several chances. I
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think
you should work as a restaurant waiter. It will assist you in communicating with
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a large number of
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people
while
also
helping you to enhance your language
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skills
. Although these occupations don't pay
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a lot of
money, It's
still
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enough
to
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make
ends
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meet
.

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Come
to my
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house
if you don't have a place to stay. I'd welcome the chance to talk with you.

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See
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

IELTS letter You have received an email from a friend from an English speaking country, Patrick, who wants to find a summer job in your country.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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