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Your friend has asked you to teach English to her or his child. You would like to borrow some books from your teacher to help you teach English to the

Your friend has asked you to teach English to her or his child. You would like to borrow some books from your teacher to help you teach English to the AgolM

Dear Mam, I am Ritika Luthra and your ex-student of the batch year 2015. I am writing this letter to request you if you can lend me some basic English books for about a month. My friend requested me to teach English to his 7 years old son. Actually, she decided to change her son's school from Hindi medium to English medium. But, the school wants to test the English skills of her son. She requested me to teach his son some basics of English for his entrance test so that he will pass the examination. I am sure you will be able to guide me about the study material which I will need to teach him and also you lend me the relevant books for one month. I would be teaching him in the evening after my office at my place. I am also available on weekends and give him some extra time because he has only one month. My friend requested me especially because my language skill in English is pretty good and this is only because of you. Please let me know if you can give me some material so I can come and collect it from you. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ritika

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Yours faithfully
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