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You rent a house through an agency. The heating system has stopped working - letter

You rent a house through an agency. The heating system has stopped working - letter aJ02w
Dear Mr. Avinav, I am tony, a tenant who rented a house through your agency last month. The heating system has stopped working from last 10 days. I am writing this letter in regard to a problem with the heating system. I rented this apartment everything going well. But suddenly a few days back the heating system stop working. The issue is that the system is simply dirty air filters and has a dirty bowler and causing equipment failure. I was also given a complaint, it has been a week now and neither has anyone contacted me nor the issue has been resolved. As the weather is too cold in my area, I want to know if it could be clean and replace the blowers as soon as possible. If you can send your personal staff to check, I will be available tomorrow. I hope you look into this matter soon. You could contact me on the phone number on the back of my envelope. Best wishes.
Dear Mr.
Avinav
,

I am tony, a tenant who rented a
house
through your agency last month. The heating system has
stopped
working from last 10 days. I am writing this letter in regard to a problem with the heating system.

I rented this apartment everything going well.
But
suddenly
a few days back the heating system
stop
working. The issue is that the system is
simply
dirty air filters and has a dirty bowler and causing equipment failure. I was
also
given
a complaint, it has been a week
now
and neither has anyone contacted me nor the issue has
been resolved
.

As the weather is too
cold
in my area, I want to know if it could be clean and replace the blowers as
soon
as possible. If you can
send
your personal staff to
check
, I will be available tomorrow.

I hope you look into this matter
soon
. You could contact me on the phone number on the back of my envelope.

Best wishes.
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IELTS letter You rent a house through an agency. The heating system has stopped working - letter

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
167 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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