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Write a letter to government about lack of sport facilities in your hometown for people on your age.

Write a letter to government about lack of sport facilities in your hometown for people on your age. qRl85

Dear Sir or Madam, This well-thought letter concerns the inadequate indoor as well as outdoor clubs for physical activities, especially for middle-aged people like me. To start with, the government should prioritize building some sports amenities in the city. Our city has plenty of parks for children, but at the same time, there are hardly any facilities for elder people. Although some people would argue that a workout at a gymnasium is more advantageous to our physical health, we should not forget the importance of yoga to our mental health. The argument for building these amenities is that obesity is gradually becoming a prominent health issue in people nowadays compared to a decade ago, and this reason in itself should be enough for the authorities to build a sports facility, a gymnasium in specific. In addition to this, the world is moving towards the problem of depression because of the ever-increasing workload, which can be solved to an extent by yoga. Moreover, a country can only flourish as long as its population is healthy. I would advise the ruling party to pay some attention to this issue because, unless the working class is physically and mentally fit, the growth of the nation is impacted. I would be grateful if you consider this suggestion of mine. With regards, Arpan parikh

Dear Sir or Madam,

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 would argue that a workout at a gymnasium is more advantageous to our physical health, we should not forget the importance of yoga to our mental health.

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people
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only
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.

I would be grateful if you consider this suggestion of mine.

With regards,

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