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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you about the article you have written about city of Tehran the other day. There was wrong information of the article and looks like that your writer and/or editor have made a few errors. First of all, Tehran is the largest capital in the Middle East and not the second one. Maybe your information about cities of Middle East is outdated. Secondly, Tehran has sistership with Seoul, the capital of republic of Korea aka South Korea, not Pyeongyang, Capital of PRK or North Korea. As this is the most renowned international travel magazine and is kind of reference to every tourist and moreover tour agencies around the world, I think its information must be 100% correct with no error at all. In this way your reputation of being the best will not be jeopardized. I am not a specialist in the matter of journalism but I think publishing a note and correcting the errors that was made in the last publication deems necessary on this matter. At the end, I want to thank you for publishing an article about my beloved city of Tehran and again thanks in advanced for receiving my letter and amending the errors has been made. Sincerely, Hossein

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you about the article you have written about city of Tehran the other day. There was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 information of the article and looks like that your writer and/or editor have made a few errors.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, Tehran is the largest capital in the Middle East and not the second one. Maybe your information about cities A determiner is probably missing here: "of the Middle East".of the Middle East
of Middle East
is outdated
. Secondly
, Tehran has Possible spelling mistake found.sister shipsisters hip
sistership
 with Seoul, the capital of republic of Korea aka South Korea, not Possible spelling mistake found.Pyongyang
Pyeongyang
, Capital of Possible spelling mistake found.ParkProPRPRCPorkPRI
PRK
 or North Korea.

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 tour agencies around the world, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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must
 be 100% correct with no error at all. In this way your reputation of being the best will not be jeopardized
.

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but
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think
 publishing a note and correcting the errors that was made
 in the last publication deems necessary on this matter.

At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, I want to thank you for publishing an article about my beloved city of Tehran and again thanks in Did you mean "advance"?advance
advanced
 for receiving my letter and amending the errors has been made
.

Sincerely
,

Hossein