Dear Hana,
I am writing with utmost pleasure that the holiday spent with you was marvellous. however, i am writing this letter to explain you that i forgot my wallet on the side drawer of your room in hassle.
i cant get over the last week which i spent with you as everyday was full of fun and exci...
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Check Your Text it's freeYou have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do
You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do jNdp
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regard to the missing card in the envelope that I have received to acknowledge it's receipt. As mentioned earlier, the new bank card is not be found in the enevelope and I would not be able to acknowledge it.
Firstly, it seems to be worrying me cause of the process or the cost of the missing card, if the bank blames it on me. Next I am more concerned about the delayed payments with a fine that I have to pay on my other bills. I am already late this month to pay the rent.
It would be grateful, if the bank would be able to cross check first to see wether they have placed the card in the letter before sending it out. I would really appreciate if a new visa card could be issued in a short time. I have attached a photocopy of the content which was inside the enevelope. I am looking forward for a reply from the bank about the issue as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
Mack
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regard to the missing in the envelope that I have received . As mentioned earlier, the new is not and I would not be able to acknowledge it.
, if the blames it on me. pay on my other bills. I am already late this month to pay the rent.
It would be grateful, if the would be able to cross they have placed the in the letter sending it out. I would could . am looking forward for a reply from the about the issue as as possible.
Yours
Mack
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IELTS letter You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do
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