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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you AWpM
Dear Hana, I am writing with utmost pleasure that the holiday spent with you was marvellous. however, i am writing this letter to explain you that i forgot my wallet on the side drawer of your room in hassle. i cant get over the last week which i spent with you as everyday was full of fun and excitement. the drive to Chandigarh was the best start of our holiday as you are that i am highly fond of long drives. then, the lunch at theme restaurant, haveli, was cherry on the cake as i could taste a different cuisine of your state. even, my husband was praising the food yesterday as well. moreover, we were surprised of the fact that you have arranged a table in a lounge where there was provision of live music. i cant explain you how soothing it was as the band was skilful in their work. overall, this was the most memorable holiday of my life after ages. getting back to my wallet, when we came back to your home late night, i was quite tired and sleepy, thus, could not put my belonging properly. in that scenario, i kept my wallet in the side drawer of your guest room in half sleep. although i packed my all things in the morning, i could not recall that i am forgetting my wallet. the wallet in really urgent as it consists of my cards and most importantly, the driving license without which i can not drive to work. so it is a humble request that handover this wallet to my cousin who resides in your city as she is coming to meet me tomorrow. i will be highly grateful for this act of kindness best regards, mani
Dear
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Hana
,

I am writing with utmost pleasure that the holiday spent with you was
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marvellous
.
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however
,
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i
am writing this letter to
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explain
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you
that
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i
forgot my
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wallet
on the side drawer of your room in hassle.

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i
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cant
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get
over the last week which
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i
spent with you as
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everyday
was full of fun and excitement.
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the
drive to Chandigarh was the best
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start
of our holiday as you are that
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i
am
highly
fond of long drives.
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then
, the lunch at theme restaurant,
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haveli
, was cherry on the cake as
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i
could taste a
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different
cuisine of your state.
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even
, my husband was praising the food yesterday
as well
.
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moreover
, we
were surprised
of the fact that you have arranged a table in a lounge where there was provision of
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live
music.
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i
cant
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explain
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you
how soothing it was as the band was
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skilful
in their work.
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overall
, this was the most memorable holiday of my life after ages.

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getting
back to my
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wallet
, when we came back to your home late night,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was quite tired and sleepy,
thus
, could not put my belonging
properly
.
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in
that scenario,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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kept
my
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wallet
in the side drawer of your guest room in half sleep.
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although
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i
packed my all things in the morning,
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i
could not recall that
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i
am forgetting my
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wallet
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
the
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wallet
in
really
urgent as it consists of my cards and most
importantly
, the driving license without which
Did you mean "I"?
i
can not drive to work.
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so
it is a humble request that handover this
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wallet
to my cousin who resides in your city as she is coming to
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meet
me tomorrow.

Did you mean "I"?
i
will be
highly
grateful for this act of kindness

best regards,

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mani

IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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