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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you DnNE
Dear Robert and Ellen, How are you both? I hope you get this letter in good condition. It’s been a very short time we spend a good and memorable time with each other but it feels like much longer. Thank you so much not only for memorable vacations as well as for sharing the lovely pictures. Staying with adorable people like you at your luxury home was the wonderful experience of my life. I really missed the yummy food which Ellen served me every day. Canada is a scenic place with remarkable wildlife, mountains, and a conducive natural environment and particular your place which is a perfect locality to spend whole life peacefully. Sorry, it has taken me too much time to write. As soon as I landed back, my dad became sick. We were running around looking after him. Now he seems to be improving. I hope he will be fine soon. Next Month, there is a 25th marriage adversary party of my parents and I will be delighted if you should come to attend. India is also a beautiful place to visit. You both can stay with us as there are many rooms in my house. We will come to pick you at the airport. I really hope you will come to attend this. Take care and write back as soon as possible. Regards, John
Dear Robert and Ellen,

How are you both? I hope you
get
this letter in
good
condition. It’s been a
very
short time we spend a
good
and memorable time with each other
but
it feels like much longer.

Thank you
so
much not
only
for memorable vacations
as well
as for sharing the lovely pictures. Staying with adorable
people
like you at your luxury home was the wonderful experience of my life. I
really
missed the yummy food which Ellen served me every day. Canada is a scenic place with remarkable wildlife, mountains, and a conducive natural environment and particular your place which is a perfect locality to spend whole life
peacefully
.

Sorry, it has taken me too much time to write. As
soon
as I landed back, my dad became sick. We were running around looking after him.
Now
he seems to be improving. I hope he will be fine
soon
.

Next
Month, there is a 25th marriage adversary party of my parents and I will
be delighted
if you should
come
to attend. India is
also
a
beautiful
place to visit. You both can stay with us as there are
many
rooms in my
house
. We will
come
to pick you at the airport. I
really
hope you will
come
to attend this.

Take care and write back as
soon
as possible.

Regards,

John
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IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
226 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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