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Rescheduling An Interview

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to reschedule my interview with your organisation which has been scheduled to hold in two weeks. Although, I have related this to the Human Resource Officer, I deem it appropriate to communicate with you formally and to make you aware of my present predicament. Sadly, my cousin passed on few days ago after a prolonged battle with colon cancer. Unfortunately, the burial has been slated to hold on the 25th which is the same date as the interview. I am obliged to be at the burial with my family not only to show my last respect to him but to also support his aged mother. Although, this is obviously not a good start in my application, I am however still very much interested in working with Viral Technologies and I am more than willing to pour my years of experience working onshore into my role as a Vessel Technician in the company. I will be grateful if an interview can be rescheduled for me at a later date which is suitable for the organisation. Once again my apologies and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours FaithfullyToyin
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to reschedule my interview with your
organisation
which has
been scheduled
to hold in two weeks. Although, I have related this to the Human Resource Officer, I deem it appropriate to communicate with you
formally
and to
make
you aware of my present predicament.
Sadly
, my cousin passed on few days ago after a prolonged battle with colon cancer. Unfortunately, the burial has
been slated
to hold on the 25th which is the same date as the interview. I
am obliged
to be at the burial with my family not
only
to
show
my last respect to him
but
to
also
support his aged mother. Although, this is
obviously
not a
good
start
in my application, I am
however
still
very
much interested in working with Viral
Technologies and
I am more than willing to pour my years of experience working onshore into my role as a Vessel Technician in the
company
. I will be grateful if an interview can
be rescheduled
for me at a later date which is suitable for the
organisation
. Once again my apologies and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
FaithfullyToyin
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IELTS letter Rescheduling An Interview

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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