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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you XeVr
Dear Tom, Firstly, I would like to thank you for the amazing arrangements you made for my trip to your hometown. I thoroughly enjoyed the whole vacation especially the home made food which was delicious. Unfortunately, I left my wallet in the red cupboard of your living room. I realized this only after reaching home. I need the wallet at the earliest since my driving licence is in my wallet and I cannot drive my car without my driving license. As you know I drive to work. Could you please place the item inside a polymer cover and send the package through courier to my residential address. Please check with the courier service to ensure that delivery is available in my neighbourhood. Also, please be sure to obtain the consignment tracking number to track the parcel. I will pay the courier charges. I sincerely apologize for my carelessness. Hope to hear from you soon. Warm regards Gopi
Dear Tom,

Firstly
, I would like to thank you for the amazing arrangements you made for my trip to your hometown. I
thoroughly
enjoyed the whole vacation
especially
the home made food which was delicious.

Unfortunately, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my wallet in the red cupboard of your living room. I realized this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
after reaching home. I need the wallet at the earliest since my driving
Possible spelling mistake. 'licence' is British English.
licence
is in my wallet and I cannot drive my car without my driving license.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you know I drive to work.

Could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
place the item inside a polymer cover and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
the package through courier to my residential address.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
with the courier service to ensure that delivery is available in my
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.
neighbourhood
.
Also
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
be sure to obtain the consignment tracking number to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
the parcel. I will pay the courier charges.

I
sincerely
apologize for my carelessness.

Hope to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Warm regards

Possible spelling mistake found.
Gopi
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IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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  American English
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156 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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