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Rescheduling An Interview

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Dear Mr Bromley, I am writing in the hope that I am able to reschedule an upcoming interview I had organised for the 17th of next month. I had previously arranged this with your secretary and had verbally agreed the date, but a situation has arisen that means I would like to postpone. I have been invited to attend my best friend’s wedding which unfortunately coincides with the date we had already established. I realise that this is not the most impressive start to my application to work with your company, but I have been asked to speak at the wedding and feel obliged to attend. I am of course very interested in the position and feel that I can offer my skills and experience to the role, so I would be very grateful if we could set a new date that fits your schedule. Once again, my apologies for the inconvenience and hope that we can reschedule. Yours sincerely, Mark Burnett

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Bromley
,

I am writing in the hope that I am able to reschedule an upcoming interview I had Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.organized
organised
 for the 17th of next
 month. I had previously arranged this with your secretary and had verbally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 the date, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a situation has arisen that means I would like to postpone.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have been invited
 to attend my best friend’s wedding which unfortunately coincides with the date we had already established. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
Possible spelling mistake. 'realise' is British English.realize
realise
 that this is not the most impressive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to my application to work with your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I have been asked
 to speak at the wedding and feel obliged to attend.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am of course
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 interested in the position and feel that I can offer my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and experience to the role, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 grateful if we could set a new date that fits your schedule.

Once again, my apologies for the inconvenience and hope that we can reschedule.

Yours sincerely
,

Mark Burnett