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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter explain why you re writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

I am writing to inform you that I received a letter from my bank today, which was supposed to contain my new bank card. Unfortunately, there was no bank card enclosed in the envelope when I opened it. I telephoned the bank to explain the problem, on the contrary I could not get through to the right department, even though I waited on the line for over half an hour, which was extremely annoying. In your letter, you asked me to acknowledge the receipt of the card, on the contrary obviously I cannot do this as I have not received it. I am now extremely worried due to the fact it is a possibility that my card has gone to another customer or got lost. What will happen if somebody has already used that card and spent my money? Will the bank repay me? Is it possible for the bank to cancel this card consequently nobody else can use it? Could you also send me a new card by secure means? I hope to hear from youin the near future.
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to contain my new
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bank
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card
. Unfortunately, there was no
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bank
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card
enclosed in the envelope when I opened it. I telephoned the
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bank
to
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explain
the problem,
on the contrary
I could not
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get
through to the right department,
even though
I waited on the line for over half an hour, which was
extremely
annoying. In your letter, you asked me to acknowledge the receipt of the
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card
,
on the contrary
obviously
I cannot do this as I have not received it. I am
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now
extremely
worried due to the fact it is a possibility that my
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card
has gone to another customer or
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got
lost. What will happen if somebody has already
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used
that
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card
and spent my money? Will the
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bank
repay me? Is it possible for the
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bank
to cancel this
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card
consequently
nobody else can
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use
it? Could you
also
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send
me a new
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card
by secure means? I hope to hear from
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the near future.
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IELTS letter You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter explain why you re writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

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  American English
1 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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