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On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you want them to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to make a claim on my travel insurance policy no: XXXX. I lost my Rolex Watch during my recent trip to New Delhi. My name is XYZ and I bought this insurance policy prior to my trip. For your information, the policy covers the cost of any item that is lost during the journey. I arrived in New Delhi on April 10 and checked into the five star hotel (name). In the evening I went for a swim in the pool. Before entering the pool I removed the watch and placed it on the pool side table but when I came out of the pool half an hour later, I found that the watch was missing. I immediately alerted the hotel staff but they could not trace my phone. Consequently, I filed a police complaint. I have attached a copy of the FIR and the invoice to this letter. Since the policy covers the watch, I request you to approve my claim and compensate me for the full value of the watch. If you need any more information, please call me on my number: 000000 Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, XYZ
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
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a claim on my travel insurance
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no:
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XXXX
. I lost my Rolex
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Watch
during my recent trip to New Delhi. My name is XYZ and I
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bought
this insurance
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prior to my trip. For your information, the
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policy
covers the cost of any item that
is lost
during the journey.

I arrived in New Delhi on April 10 and
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checked
into the
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five star
hotel (name). In the evening I went for a swim in the
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pool
.
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Before
entering the
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pool
I removed the
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watch
and placed it on the
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pool
side table
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but
when I came out of the
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pool
half an hour later, I found that the
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watch
was missing. I immediately alerted the hotel staff
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but
they could not trace my phone.
Consequently
, I filed a police complaint. I have attached a copy of the FIR and the invoice to this letter.

Since the
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policy
covers the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
, I request you to approve my claim and compensate me for the full value of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
. If you need any more information,
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please
call me on my number: 000000

Thank you for your time and support.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

XYZ
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IELTS letter On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you want them to do

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  American English
8 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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