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you have just read on article in an international travel magazine which contain some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in this article. explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information. suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my heartbroken while I read an international travel magazine which consist of inaccurate particular about the Mary restaurant. In your magazine it was mentioned as that Mary hotel served dehydrated foods and spoiled vegetables to the public. It was completely incorrect news. I often visit that hotel to fulfill my stomach whenever I am feel hungry if I am out of my home. I have seen their kitchen while they preparing menus and discovered how neat they are and having fresh healthy food items. Even though the hotel was small but still they providing healthy foods to the society. Everyone in my town read your magazine all the times to know about the society and surroundings. It's crucial that magazine like yours should published correct information because wrong information can ruin someone's life. I suggest that one of your reporter who had worked on this matter must come and visit this hotel once before you rewrite the article with accurate valuable information. I would appreciate your careful consideration to this situation. Yours sincerely, Beulah.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my heartbroken while I read an international travel
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served dehydrated foods and spoiled vegetables to the public. It was completely incorrect news. I
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visit that
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hotel
to fulfill my stomach whenever I am feel hungry if I am out of my home. I have
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seen
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menus and discovered how neat they are and having fresh healthy food items.
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they providing
healthy foods to the society. Everyone in my town read your
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magazine
all the times to know about the society and surroundings. It's crucial that
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magazine
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information can ruin someone's life. I suggest that one of your reporter who had worked on this matter
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Yours
sincerely
, Beulah.

IELTS letter you have just read on article in an international travel magazine which contain some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in this article. explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information. suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.

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