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One of your friends lives in another country. You want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • describe why you want to work in that country • tell him/her about your skills and experience • ask some questions related to work (e.g. wage/salary)

Dear Riri, I hope this letter finds you in the best health and in radiant spirit. It has been a long time since we met; I was planning to look out for work in your country. As you are aware In India due to stiff competition it is difficult to find the right opportunity. Canada is a growing country and even is happy to invite immigrants from different countries for permanent settlement, so I thought this can be a good shift in my career. I am working in the MNC for the past 10 years in the marketing department and have good experience in digital marketing as well. My main forte is handling international clients. I believe these skills will help me to search for the right job in this country. I would be highly obliged if you can guide and suggest to me the right platform to engage with people of my field to help me complete my search for employment and also the pay package for my level of the job. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Yours Lovingly. xyz
Dear
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Riri
,

I hope this letter finds you in the best health and in radiant spirit. It has been a long time since we met; I was planning to look out for work in your country.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you are aware In India due to stiff competition it is difficult to find the right opportunity. Canada is a growing country and even is happy to invite immigrants from
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different
countries for permanent settlement,
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so
I
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thought
this can be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
shift in my career.

I am working in the MNC for the past 10 years in the marketing department and have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
experience in digital marketing
as well
. My main forte is handling international clients. I believe these
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to search for the right job in this country.

I would be
highly
obliged if you can guide and suggest to me the right platform to engage with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
of my field to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me complete my search for employment and
also
the pay package for my level of the job.

Looking forward to hearing back from you.

Yours
Lovingly
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
xyz

IELTS letter One of your friends lives in another country. You want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • describe why you want to work in that country • tell him/her about your skills and experience • ask some questions related to work (e. g. wage/salary)

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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