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You have just read ab article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect, write a letter to the editor of magazine. In letter mention that correct information in article, explain why it is important tfor magazine to give correct information , suggest what magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my concern for wrong information published about my town in one of your leading international traveller magazine. Today’ morning when I was reading your magazine’s latest edition, I found out that there is misleading information mentioned about Mathura which is my town. This article wrongfully mentioned that local shops have vanished in my town and only big malls are available for shopping. Due to that, anyone who wish to see or buy Mathura’s local handmade crafts, won’t be able to do this. I would like to make a correction here that there is huge local market in Mathura. Although market has been relocated to outskirts of our town for traveller convenience. I am sure your team have missed to explore outskirts area of the city. Mathura is famous for handmade art and craft articles. Local workers have represented their talent at national and international level and have received lots of appreciation. Many local items are exported across world. Due to that, information published in your magazine is making wrong image of our town. I request you to correct this information as soon as possible. I would recommend to revisit and explore missed part of our town and publish a new article in your upcoming edition. Looking forward to your prompt response. Sincerely, Vijay Luxmi

Dear Sir or Madam,

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wrong
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information
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 in one of your leading international Possible spelling mistake. ‘traveller’ is British English.traveler
traveller
 magazine.

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information
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town
. This article wrongfully
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local
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town
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only
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big
 malls are available for shopping. Due to that, anyone who wish to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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Mathura
’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
 handmade crafts, won’t be able to do this. I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a correction here that there is huge You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
 market in Possible spelling mistake found.MatureMatherMauraMithraAhuraMatsuda
Mathura
. Although market has been relocated
 to outskirts of our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 for Possible spelling mistake. ‘traveller’ is British English.traveler
traveller
 convenience. I am sure your team have The verb ‘missed’ is used with the gerund form: “missed exploring”.missed exploring
missed to explore
 outskirts area of the city.

Possible spelling mistake found.MatureMatherMauraMithraAhuraMatsuda
Mathura
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 for handmade art and craft articles. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
Local
 workers have represented their talent at national and international level and have received lots of appreciation. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
 items are exported
 across world. Due to that, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 published in your magazine is making This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 image of our town.

I request you to correct this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. I would The verb ‘recommend’ is used with the gerund form: “recommend revisiting”.recommend revisiting
recommend to revisit
 and explore missed part of our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 and publish a new article in your upcoming edition.

Looking forward to your prompt response.

Sincerely
,

Vijay Possible spelling mistake found.Lux mi
Luxmi