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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board.

You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. JdBB

Dear Mr. Walker, I am writing this letter to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager. Which I have seen recently on the university's notice board. Currently, I am studying on M. B. A program at the Loren Brusque University, graduating in 2020. I am studying the subjects that are relevant to this job post. Moreover, I am having exposure in other management skills by taking various additional courses. During my studies, I was working in one of the reputed company. Where I have learnt managerial skills, communication skills and I use to interact with various foreign clients. As a team leader, I gained a valuable experience for the post of Quality Assurance Manager. Which I feel would be better fit for this position. I am looking forward to hear from you and exciting to work with you. Thank you for consideration of my application. Yours Sincerely, Rishav Mittal

Dear Mr. Walker, I am writing this letter to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager. “Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
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 recently on the university's notice board. Currently
, I am studying on M. B. A program at the Loren Brusque University, graduating in 2020. I am studying the subjects that are relevant to this job post. Moreover
, I am having exposure in other management This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
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company
. Where I have Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
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skills
, communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and I Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".used to
use to
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to hear
 from you and exciting to work with you. Thank you for consideration of my application. Yours Sincerely
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