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You are going to spend your vacation in Rome, Italy. Your friend's grandfather lives there and has offered to let you stay in his apartment. Write a letter to your friend's grandfather. In your letter: Thank him for the offer but politely decline Inform him of when you will be in Rome and your travel plans Invite him for an outing.

You are going to spend your vacation in Rome, Italy. Your friend's grandfather lives there and has offered to let you stay in his apartment. Write a letter to your friend's grandfather. In your letter: Thank him for the offer but politely decline Inform him of when you will be in Rome and your travel plans Invite him for an outing. 9kMj

Dear. Mr. Harris, I hope this letter find you in amazing health and good spirit. The purpose of writing this letter is to thank you for your generous offer but I would politely decline your help of providing me accommodation as my friends are also travelling so we have decided to share the accommodation expenses. It is sensible and save us some money. I don't want to be any kind of burden on you. All of us want to experience the real Italy more over its very fascinating to listen to the experience of other travelers at your staycation. I hope you will understand my point of view. I will be reaching Rome on 14th Feb in the evening. We will be retiring straight in our room rest for the night and start our vocation with visiting different monuments, Art gallery and famous eating spots, Also planning to explore hidden gems of the city. We are going to dedicate 4 days to Rome, On 19th Feb we will be leaving for the Venice via train. We will explore the city on water for three days and return back to Rome as we have flight to catch on 23rd Feb. Although I am very excited for my trip but I would love to meet you and take you for lunch, May be you can suggest some place to dine, chit chat and share your experience. I also have to give you the souvenir sent by your grandson. I hope you like it. Looking forward to meeting you. Yours faithfully

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good
 spirit. The purpose of writing this letter is to thank you for your generous offer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I would politely
 decline your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of providing me accommodation as my friends are also
 travelling This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we have decided to share the accommodation expenses. It is sensible and save us This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 money. I don't want to be any kind of burden on you. All of us want to experience the real Italy more over its This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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staycation
. I hope you will understand my point of view.

I will be reaching Rome on 14th Feb in the evening. We will be retiring straight in our room rest for the night and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 our vocation with visiting This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 monuments, Art gallery and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 eating spots, Also
 planning to explore hidden gems of the city. We are going to dedicate 4 days to Rome, On 19th Feb we will be leaving for the Venice via train. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
We
 will explore the city on water for three days and Consider using "return".return
return back
 to Rome as we have flight to catch on 23rd Feb.

Although I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited for my trip This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you and take you for lunch, Did you mean "maybe" (= perhaps)?Maybe
May be
 you can suggest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 place to dine, This word is normally spelled with hyphen.chit-chat
chit chat
 and share your experience. I also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 give you the souvenir This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 by your grandson. I hope you like it. Looking forward to meeting you.

Yours faithfully