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You have read an advertisement about a job position as a babysitter and you should write an application letter

You have read an advertisement about a job position as a babysitter and you should write an application letter L3od8

Dear Sir/MadamI am writing to apply for a job position which you gave an advertisement in a newspaper. As you have written there I understood that you are seeking for a babysitter, who is honest and responsible. I think I am suitable for the job. I am 28 years old and I am not married, so I can work full -time. I am working as a nanny for about 6 years now, I recently quit my former job because a child I was looking after has become a teenager and they do not need a nanny any more. I have got a qualification as a babysitter, I took a 6 -month babysitter preparing course before getting my previous job. I also know English and Russian, which I can teach your child if you want me. I have got a driver's licence, that means I can pick up the other children from school. I am easy-going and I love working with chilren. I do not smoke or drink alcohol, I prefer to lead a healthy lifestyle. My CV and the reference letter from my former job are attached below. I am looking forward to your reply. SinserelyVenera Kim

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 writing to apply for a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 position which you gave an advertisement in a newspaper. As you have written there I understood that you are seeking for a babysitter, who is honest and responsible. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I am suitable for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
. I am 28 years Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).old, and
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 I am not married, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can work full -time. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 am working as a nanny for about 6 years This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, I recently quit my former You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
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because
 a child I was looking after has become a Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).teenager, and
teenager and
 they do not need a nanny Did you mean the adverb "anymore"?anymore
any more
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a qualification as a babysitter, I took a 6 -month babysitter preparing course This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 getting my previous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
 know English and Russian, which I can teach your child if you want me. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a driver's Possible spelling mistake. 'licence' is British English.license
licence
, that means I can pick up the other children from school. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am easy-going and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 working with Possible spelling mistake found.children
chilren
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 do not smoke or drink alcohol, I prefer to lead a healthy lifestyle. My CV and the reference letter from my former You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
are attached
 below. I am looking forward to your reply. Possible spelling mistake found.
SinserelyVenera
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