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From: Sunny Chen To: Janet Hill Subject: Re: Hi! Hi Janet! Lovely to hear from you and how exciting that you're coming! You've picked a great area to stay in as it's right next to a must-see attraction, Gardens by the Bay.

From: Sunny Chen To: Janet Hill Subject: Re: Hi! Hi Janet! Lovely to hear from you and how exciting that you're coming! You've picked a great area to stay in as it's right next to a must-see attraction, Gardens by the Bay. They light them up at night and the kids will love it. Another place to take the little ones is the zoo, and the Night Safari is really worth doing. The animals are much more active at night than during the day, so it's pretty special. As for food, there's quite a variety here. I'd recommend trying laksa and kaya toast – they're both really typical Singaporean foods. You can also eat well and cheaply at street markets. You should definitely check them out. Can't wait to see you all! Sunny

From: Sunny Chen

To: Janet Hill

Subject: Re: Hi!

Hi Janet!

Lovely to hear from you and how exciting that you're coming!

You've picked a great area to stay in as it's right next
 to a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 attraction, Gardens by the Bay. They light them up at night and the kids will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 it. Another place to take the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 ones is the zoo, and the Night Safari is really
 worth doing. The animals are much more active at night than during the day, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it's pretty special.

As for food, there's quite a variety here. I'd recommend trying Possible spelling mistake found.Lassa
laksa
 and Possible spelling mistake found.MayaKayKaraKayekanakayak
kaya
 toast Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
 they're both really
 typical Singaporean foods. You can also
 eat well and cheaply
 at street markets. You should definitely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 them out.

Can't wait to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you all!

Sunny

IELTS letter From: Sunny Chen To: Janet Hill Subject: Re: Hi! Hi Janet! Lovely to hear from you and how exciting that you're coming! You've picked a great area to stay in as it's right next to a must-see attraction, Gardens by the Bay.

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American English

7 paragraphs

132 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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