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From: Sunny Chen To: Janet Hill Subject: Re: Hi! Hi Janet! Lovely to hear from you and how exciting that you're coming! You've picked a great area to stay in as it's right next to a must-see attraction, Gardens by the Bay.

From: Sunny Chen To: Janet Hill Subject: Re: Hi! Hi Janet! Lovely to hear from you and how exciting that you're coming! You've picked a great area to stay in as it's right next to a must-see attraction, Gardens by the Bay. EqVyr
From: Sunny Chen To: Janet Hill Subject: Re: Hi! Hi Janet! Lovely to hear from you and how exciting that you're coming! You've picked a great area to stay in as it's right next to a must-see attraction, Gardens by the Bay. They light them up at night and the kids will love it. Another place to take the little ones is the zoo, and the Night Safari is really worth doing. The animals are much more active at night than during the day, so it's pretty special. As for food, there's quite a variety here. I'd recommend trying laksa and kaya toast – they're both really typical Singaporean foods. You can also eat well and cheaply at street markets. You should definitely check them out. Can't wait to see you all! Sunny
From: Sunny Chen

To: Janet Hill

Subject: Re: Hi!

Hi Janet!

Lovely to hear from you and how exciting that you're coming!

You've picked a great area to stay in as it's right
next
to a
must
-
see
attraction, Gardens by the Bay. They light them up at night and the kids will
love
it. Another place to take the
little
ones is the zoo, and the Night Safari is
really
worth doing. The animals are much more active at night than during the day,
so
it's pretty special.

As for food, there's quite a variety here. I'd recommend trying
laksa
and
kaya
toast
they're both
really
typical Singaporean foods. You can
also
eat well and
cheaply
at street markets. You should definitely
check
them out.

Can't wait to
see
you all!

Sunny
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IELTS letter From: Sunny Chen To: Janet Hill Subject: Re: Hi! Hi Janet! Lovely to hear from you and how exciting that you're coming! You've picked a great area to stay in as it's right next to a must-see attraction, Gardens by the Bay.

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