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Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to help him/her to move explain how exactly you can help ask him/her some questions about the new house

Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to help him/her to move explain how exactly you can help ask him/her some questions about the new house 0gXG
Dear Sam, Hope you are fine. I’m writing to express my happiness about your relocation to a new apartment. I was over the moon when you gave me the news of shifting of house. When you are planning to shift? Additionally, have you completed your packing or you are seeking services from movers and packers? In addition, there are crockery units in your home which needs special attention during packing and unpacking. Since, I’ve shifted my house recently, I can be a helping hand to you. Don’t be shy in asking any sort of help. Furthermore, I’ve details of movers and packers companies with whom I can speak and if required can also bring them to your house. I’ll take care of your ornaments until you are settled. I can also speak to internet, satellite television provider for reinstating the connection at your new address. Also, you can have food of your liking at my house. Finally, share your location of your new house along with the pictures of the interiors. What are the services the builder is providing? Do you have dedicated car parking for your flat? Keep in touch. Warm Regards, Tom
Dear Sam,

Hope you are fine. I’m writing to express my happiness about your relocation to a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
apartment.

I was over the moon when you gave me the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
of shifting of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
. When you are planning to shift?
Additionally
, have you completed your packing or you are seeking services from movers and packers?
In addition
, there are crockery units in your home which needs special attention during packing and unpacking. Since, I’ve shifted my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
recently, I can be a helping hand to you. Don’t be shy in asking any sort of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

Furthermore
, I’ve
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of movers and packers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
with whom I can speak and if required can
also
bring them to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
. I’ll take care of your ornaments until you
are settled
. I can
also
speak to internet, satellite television provider for reinstating the connection at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
address.
Also
, you can have food of your liking at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Finally
, share your location of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
along with the pictures of the interiors. What are the services the builder is providing? Do you have dedicated car parking for your flat?

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Keep
in touch.

Warm Regards,

Tom
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IELTS letter Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to help him/her to move explain how exactly you can help ask him/her some questions about the new house

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
193 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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