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You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible.

You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible. q9or
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I had enrolled for the cricket course in March, but due to medical reasons, cannot complete the entire course. I had joined the course in order to become a professional cricketer. I want to improve my game under the tutelage of your acclaimed faculty and get the opportunity to showcase my talent. Unfortunately, I have been diagnosed with poor eyesight and have to wear glasses all the time. I have been advised by the specialist to discontinue any physical and mentally strenuous activity. Hence, I will not be able to continue the course. This being the case, I wonder if it is possible for me to get a partial refund. Alternatively, could the enrollment amount be held with you until the time I rejoin, once the restrictions are eased? I trust that as the course director you will award due consideration to my situation and facilitate a suitable way forward. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Ms. Rajani Roy
Dear Sir,

I am writing to inform you that I had enrolled for the cricket course in March,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
due to medical reasons, cannot complete the entire course.

I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
the course in order to become a professional cricketer.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
my game under the tutelage of your acclaimed faculty and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the opportunity to showcase my talent.

Unfortunately, I have
been diagnosed
with poor eyesight and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
wear glasses all the time. I have
been advised
by the specialist to discontinue any physical and mentally strenuous activity.
Hence
, I will not be able to continue the course.

This being the case, I wonder if it is possible for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a partial refund.
Alternatively
, could the enrollment amount
be held
with you until the time I rejoin, once the restrictions are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
eased
?

I trust that as the course director you will award due consideration to my situation and facilitate a suitable way forward. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ms.
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Rajani
Roy
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IELTS letter You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible.

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