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You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible.

You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible. 50wQ
I am writing this letter to share some unfortunate news regarding the discontinuation of my training. First of all, I would like to thank you for your constant support and motivation to improve my game from the day I joined the sports club, and as a result, I’m the most eligible player for the upcoming state-level tournament. Thank you for the brilliant training sessions and for inculcating the skill set required for the same. However, I regret to inform you that as a result of an unexpected medical circumstance, I am unable to pursue this course. I have severe shoulder pain as a consequence of a past injury, and I am physically unfit to play any sport for at least 1 year according to the physician, also any kind of physical exaggeration may aggravate the symptoms. This news came as a shock to me, and I’m under medical observation presently and, have taken the decision to stay back at home. This being the case, I wonder if it is possible for me to get a partial refund if circumstances are not in favor of me to continue further. As per the doctor, the treatment is expensive, and to compensate for that expense, I request a refund of course fees on a prorated basis. I look forward to hearing from you.
I am writing this letter to share
some
unfortunate news regarding the discontinuation of my training.

First of all
, I would like to thank you for your constant support and motivation to
improve
my game from the day I
joined
the sports club, and
as a result
, I’m the most eligible player for the upcoming state-level tournament. Thank you for the brilliant training sessions and for inculcating the
skill
set required for the same.
However
, I regret to inform you that
as a result
of an unexpected medical circumstance, I am unable to pursue this course.

I have severe shoulder pain as a consequence of a past injury, and I am
physically
unfit to play any sport for at least 1 year according to the physician,
also
any kind of physical exaggeration may aggravate the symptoms. This news came as a shock to me, and I’m under medical observation
presently
and, have taken the decision to stay back at home.

This being the case, I wonder if it is possible for me to
get
a partial refund if circumstances are not in favor of me to continue
further
. As per the doctor, the treatment is expensive, and to compensate for that expense, I request a refund
of course
fees on a prorated basis.

I look forward to hearing from you.
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IELTS letter You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible.

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220 words
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