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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should write at least 150 words.

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear 2XGj
Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well. I am writing in regards to the Cyber Security computer course that I am interested in. Although I completed my Bachelor of Science and was never able to educate myself regarding computing, the Cyber Security course bring my interest towards computing because it is one of the most demanding Information Technology course in the whole world. Whilst enquiring about the enrolment details regarding the course, I came to know that it requires the students who are joining to have completed an elementary course in Information Technology Security. Since I have the desire and zest in me to complete the course, I would really want to know that if there is any special exception, so that I can get enrolled in the course. Please write back to me with the crucial information about the enrolment. I would be eagerly waiting for your response. Yours sincerely Juveria Siddiqua
Dear Sir,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
the Cyber Security computer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
that I
am interested
in.

Although I completed my Bachelor of Science and was never able to educate myself regarding computing, the Cyber Security
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
bring my interest towards computing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it is one of the most demanding Information Technology
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in the whole world.

Whilst
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enquiring
about the
Possible spelling mistake. 'enrolment' is British English.
enrolment
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
regarding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
, I came to know that it requires the students who are joining to have completed an elementary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in Information Technology Security. Since I have the desire and zest in me to complete the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
, I would
really
want to know that if there is any special exception,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
enrolled in the course.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
write back to me with the crucial information about the
Possible spelling mistake. 'enrolment' is British English.
enrolment
. I would be
eagerly
waiting for your response.

Yours
sincerely


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Juveria
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Siddiqua

IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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153 words
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  • Check your writing for errors
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should write at least 150 words.