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You are going to another country to study . You would like to do a part time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help write a letter to this friend you would give details of your study plan explain why you want to get a part time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help write a letter to this friend you would give details of your study plan explain why you want to get a part time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job bPLB
Dear Anna, I hope this letter finds you well. I'm just writing this letter to ask some help. Do you remember those days we played in child hood. I am very galvanized your life style. Why don't you come and stay here for your vacation we have a spare room also. I am competing my final ug course in India. So I planned to do my PG nursing course in Canada. I completed my PG course earlier than it was. any way am back to the normal. I know that you are already settle in Canada. I am looking mercurial, I didnnt expect this. While I came to Canada I need a part time job well the place was very new and shall you help me to check the root map. Basically I am a egregious and ingegious girl. So I couldn't suddenly identify the place. I suggest that anomalous cold wether codition you provide an ancient car for me I will return you soon as possible had a great time. Hope you see you soonReeja
Dear Anna, I hope this letter finds you well. I'm
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just
writing this letter to ask
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some
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help
. Do you remember those days we played in child hood. I am
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very
galvanized your life style. Why don't you
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come
and stay here for your vacation we have a spare room
also
. I am competing my final
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ug
course in India.
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So
I planned to do my PG nursing course in Canada. I completed my PG course earlier than it was.
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any
way am back to the normal. I know that you are already settle in Canada. I am looking mercurial, I
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didnnt
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expect
this. While I came to Canada I need a
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part time
job well the place was
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very
new and shall you
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help
me to
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check
the root map.
Basically
I am
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
egregious and
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ingegious
girl.
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So
I couldn't
suddenly
identify the place. I suggest that anomalous
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cold
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wether
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codition
you provide an ancient car for me I will return you
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soon
as possible had a great time. Hope you
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see
you
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
soonReeja

IELTS letter You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help write a letter to this friend you would give details of your study plan explain why you want to get a part time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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  American English
1 paragraphs
175 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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