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You are going to another country to study . You would like to do a part time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help write a letter to this friend you would give details of your study plan explain why you want to get a part time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help write a letter to this friend you would give details of your study plan explain why you want to get a part time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job 0D2B
Dear Anna, How are you? Hope this letter feels you good. I'm just writing this letter to ask some help. I am veraciously speaking that I complete my back nursing in India I planned to to do phone in Canada yet I decided which provides but my dream was to do in Ontario provinces I completed all my paper worked and getting pass port alsoLast year I heard a news that you have settled in Canada I was very happy and proud of you. In my loan fund I will mannage my education no need to worry about that but my living expances have to manage So I need a help such as a part time job from you. Shall you help for me? Any kind of work I will mannage! Don't worry about that! You nknow an very egregious for visit a new places so help me to take a part time job. In India still I remember that art full days crucially we shared our cloths I am mercurial that appiearence has changed. Personally I am mismarised we both at joining in Canada I suggest that you will provide my ancient car it will definitely help for me Hope your prompt Yours lovingly, Merily
Dear Anna, How are you? Hope this letter feels you
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writing this letter to ask
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some
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help
. I am
veraciously
speaking that I complete my back nursing in India I planned
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to to
do phone in Canada
yet
I decided which provides
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but
my dream was to do in Ontario provinces I completed all my paper worked and getting pass port
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alsoLast
year I heard
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a news
that you have settled in Canada I was
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very
happy and proud of you. In my loan fund I will
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mannage
my education no need to worry about that
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but
my living
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expances
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have to
manage
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So
I need a
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help
such as a
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part time
job from you. Shall you
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help
for me? Any kind of work I will
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mannage
! Don't worry about that! You
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nknow
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an
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very
egregious for visit a new
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places
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so
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help
me to take a
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part time
job. In India
still
I remember that art full days
crucially
we shared our cloths I am mercurial that
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appiearence
has
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changed
.
Personally
I am
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mismarised
we both at joining in Canada I suggest that you will provide my ancient car it will definitely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
for me Hope your prompt Yours
lovingly
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Merily
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IELTS letter You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help write a letter to this friend you would give details of your study plan explain why you want to get a part time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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  American English
1 paragraphs
205 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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