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You are going to another country to study you would like to do a part time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help

You are going to another country to study you would like to do a part time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help P8Gw
Dear Anna, I hope this letter finds you well. I'm just writting this letter to thank our unforgettable moment and ask some help do you remember those days we played in child hood. it is very veracious for both of us. I'm completing my final year ug nursing in India. So I planned to continue my PG course in Canada. My art full course was completed earlier than I thought! so I am back to normal. I knew than you are working in Canada for past 2 years I am mercirial about you. had a great time. I need da part time to mannage my studied and other expenses so with your regards shall you help me to identify the places you know that basically I am egregious and ingenoius girl. I suggest that you give an old model car for me. it will show the roads for me there, wether is minuse 40. I didn't feel it those wethers. Hope you see you soon
Dear Anna, I hope this letter finds you well. I'm
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just
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writting
this letter to thank our unforgettable moment and ask
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some
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help
do you remember those days we played in child hood.
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it
is
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very
veracious for both of us. I'm completing my final year
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ug
nursing in India.
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So
I planned to continue my PG course in Canada. My art full course
was completed
earlier than I
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thought
!
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so
I am back to normal. I knew than you are working in Canada for past 2 years I am
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mercirial
about you.
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had
a great time. I need
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da
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part time
to
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mannage
my studied and other expenses
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so
with your regards shall you
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help
me to identify the places you know that
basically
I am egregious and
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ingenoius
girl. I suggest that you give an
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old
model car for me. it will
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show
the roads for me there,
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wether
is
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minuse
40.
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I
didn't feel it those
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wethers
. Hope you
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see
you
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soon

IELTS letter You are going to another country to study you would like to do a part time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help

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  American English
1 paragraphs
164 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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