Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans Write a letter to your friend

You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans Write a letter to your friend kgLdK

Dear Jack, I’m writing this letter to let you know that we have to change our holiday plan. Actually, I was very excited about meeting you along with our other friends after a long time. I was just waiting for that day to relive the memories of our college days. As planned, I was about to book a resort in Sapa. However, just yesterday I heard news that land sliding had occurred in a few areas of Lao Cai due to heavy rainfall. At this time, I think it is not advisable to travel as it is a hill station and also there is a chance that we could get stuck in rain. I know there will be a mild shower during the month of September but this time the rain is heavy. I don’t want to cancel the trip. How about visiting Ha Long? As you know, it has many exotic places and spectacular beaches to visit and enjoy. Let me know your thoughts after discussing with our friends. I’m looking forward to your quick reply. Best Regards, Tan.

Dear Jack, I’m writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
 that we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 our holiday plan.

Actually, I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited about meeting you along with our other friends after a long time. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 waiting for that day to relive the memories of our college days.

As planned, I was about to book a resort in Possible spelling mistake found.SagaSpaAPASAPSaraSap
Sapa
. However
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 yesterday I heard news that land sliding had occurred in a few areas of Lao Possible spelling mistake found.CAICanCarCapCatCab
Cai
 due to heavy rainfall. At this time, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is not advisable to travel as it is a hill station and also
 there is a chance that we could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 stuck in rain. I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
 there will be a mild shower during the month of September This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this time the rain is heavy.

I don’t want to cancel the trip. How about visiting Ha Long? As you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
, it has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 exotic places and spectacular beaches to visit and enjoy. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
 your thoughts after discussing with our friends.

I’m looking forward to your quick reply.

Best Regards, Tan. 