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Mr. William Gray sent you an email with compliments on the successful project with your company. Please write back and ask for a testimonial.

Mr. William Gray sent you an email with compliments on the successful project with your company. Please write back and ask for a testimonial. Edq8q
Dear Mr. Gray, Thank you very much for the positive feedback you have made on our recent project. I am writing this email to ask you for a quick favour. In order to facilitate our marketing campaign for this project, we are collecting clients’ testimonials that we can add to our list of satisfied clients. In fact, they should be your real experience with our company because our prospective clients do not care much about what we say about ourselves but yours. All you have to do is simply reply to this email with your comments, and it would be great if you can do this within this week. If you still have any concern, please feel free to contact me at any time. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you and best regards, Nguyen Minh Khang
Dear Mr. Gray,

Thank you
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very
much for the
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positive
feedback you have made on our recent project. I am writing this email to ask you for a quick
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favour
.

In order to facilitate our marketing campaign for this project, we are collecting clients’ testimonials that we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
to our list of satisfied clients. In fact, they should be your real experience with our
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company
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because
our prospective clients do not care much about what we say about ourselves
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but
yours. All you
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have to
do is
simply
reply to this email with your comments, and it would be great if you can do this within this week.

If you
still
have any concern,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
feel free to contact me at any time. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Thank you and best regards,

Nguyen
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Minh
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Khang

IELTS letter Mr. William Gray sent you an email with compliments on the successful project with your company. Please write back and ask for a testimonial.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
139 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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