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Suppose your community have an website where you can make a comment if the society's people suffering any kind of problems. The electricity problem is increasing nowadays in your area. Why this is happening? Is there anyone who is responsible for this issue? What could be the probable solutions do you think?

Suppose your community have an website where you can make a comment if the society's people suffering any kind of problems. The electricity problem is increasing nowadays in your area. Why this is happening? Is there anyone who is responsible for this issue? What could be the probable solutions do you think? PEk8J

Hello. Currently it is noticiable that the energy power is becoming one of the major meadache in our locality. However, we have to find out why this is happening because it can not be occured in such a schorching hot seasion. Anyway, from my perspective, I assume that the electricity has gone frequently due to increasing number of people are setteling down in this regoin. Therefore, the authorities have to ensure that everyone gets the electricity at least for some time. Nevertheless, government have to take all the responsibilities because they are supposed to ponder about this matter. As long as the head of the authority would not think about this perilous consequences, they never find any solutions. If they really want to solve the problen, they ought to take a long-term project in order to generate adequate electricity.

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noticiable
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meadache
 in our locality. However
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have to
 find out why this is happening This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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occured
 in such a Possible spelling mistake found.scorching
schorching
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seasion
. Anyway, from my perspective, I assume that the electricity has gone frequently
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people
 are Possible spelling mistake found.settling
setteling
 down in this Possible spelling mistake found.regionregainrejoinrecoin
regoin
. Therefore
, the authorities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 ensure that everyone This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 the electricity at least for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time. Nevertheless
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take all the responsibilities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are supposed
 to ponder about this matter. As long as the head of the authority would not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about this perilous consequences, they never find any solutions. If they really
 want to solve the Possible spelling mistake found.problem
problen
, they ought to take a long-term project in order to generate adequate electricity. 