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Suppose your community have an website where you can make a comment if the society's people suffering any kind of problems. The electricity problem is increasing nowadays in your area. Why this is happening? Is there anyone who is responsible for this issue? What could be the probable solutions do you think?

Suppose your community have an website where you can make a comment if the society's people suffering any kind of problems. The electricity problem is increasing nowadays in your area. Why this is happening? Is there anyone who is responsible for this issue? What could be the probable solutions do you think? PEk8J
Hello. Currently it is noticiable that the energy power is becoming one of the major meadache in our locality. However, we have to find out why this is happening because it can not be occured in such a schorching hot seasion. Anyway, from my perspective, I assume that the electricity has gone frequently due to increasing number of people are setteling down in this regoin. Therefore, the authorities have to ensure that everyone gets the electricity at least for some time. Nevertheless, government have to take all the responsibilities because they are supposed to ponder about this matter. As long as the head of the authority would not think about this perilous consequences, they never find any solutions. If they really want to solve the problen, they ought to take a long-term project in order to generate adequate electricity.
Hello.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Currently
it is
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noticiable
that the energy power is becoming one of the major
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meadache
in our locality.
However
, we
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have to
find out why this is happening
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it can not be
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occured
in such a
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schorching
hot
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seasion
. Anyway, from my perspective, I assume that the electricity has gone
frequently
due to increasing number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are
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setteling
down in this
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regoin
.
Therefore
, the authorities
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
ensure that everyone
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
the electricity at least for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time.
Nevertheless
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
take all the responsibilities
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they
are supposed
to ponder about this matter. As long as the head of the authority would not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about this perilous consequences, they never find any solutions. If they
really
want to solve the
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problen
, they ought to take a long-term project in order to generate adequate electricity.
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IELTS letter Suppose your community have an website where you can make a comment if the society's people suffering any kind of problems. The electricity problem is increasing nowadays in your area. Why this is happening? Is there anyone who is responsible for this issue? What could be the probable solutions do you think?

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  American English
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