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A letter to a friend about driving

A letter to a friend about driving 5L2jP
Dear Mary, I'm writing to you, because I heard that you're interesting in driving but have some doubts and questions on the topic. As you might know I have received my driver's license recently and I would like to provide you with some information and help. First of all, I would like to say that driver's license and ability to drive give you much more freedom of moving than you have with public transport. Of course, it is not easy at first when you are only learning how to drive but when you get more experienced it will pay off. Also I would like to recommend you the driving school where I was taking lessons. It is called "Pilot driving lessons". The driving intsructor in this school is very patient and will help you at each stage of your preparation and exam. Another recommendation from me is to read and reread the road code. You need not only learn how to solve theory tests, but understand the rules and review them when you start driving on the roads. I hope this information will help you. Good luck.
Dear Mary,

I'm writing to you,
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because
I heard that you're
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interesting
in
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driving
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but
have
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doubts and questions on the topic.

As you might know I have received my driver's license recently and I would like to provide you with
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some
information and
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help
.

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First of all
, I would like to say that driver's license and ability to drive give you much more freedom of moving than you have with public transport.
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, it is not easy at
first
when you are
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only
learning how to drive
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but
when you
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get
more experienced it will pay off.

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Also
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driving
school where I was taking lessons. It
is called
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Pilot
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driving
lessons
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. The
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driving
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intsructor
in this school is
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very
patient and will
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help
you at each stage of your preparation and exam.

Another recommendation from me is to read and reread the road code. You need not
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only
learn how to solve theory
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tests
,
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but
understand the
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rules
and review them when you
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start
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driving
on the roads.

I hope this information will
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help
you.

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Good
luck.
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IELTS letter A letter to a friend about driving

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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