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You have organized to go on a holiday with your friend.

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Dear Devina, I hope this letter find you in sound health. I'm writing to let you know that I couldn't accompany you on the holiday trip to Malaysia. As, my mother's health made me change my plans. I was extremely excited about the Malaysia trip which we had planned together. And, I had made all the necessary arrangements for it, like, booked the most affordable and attractive and beautiful hotel in Malaysia, bought few beach attire, sunscreen lotions, and comfortable shoes for us to use on our vacation. In addition, I also spoke to one of my friend in Malaysia to meet and guide us to the amazing destinations there. When I was about to book the airplane tickets for us, I got an emergency call from my sister yesterday. She had informed me that my mother has suffered a serious leg injury. And, I cannot neglect my mother's health for enjoyment as she has sacrificed her desires for me. Therefore, I made a call to your husband the previous day to ask him if he could accompany you to the trip. And he said he can take a leave to spend pleasurable time with you at Malaysia. I have also booked airplane tickets for both of you. I hope you understand my situation and forgive me for my absence at the holiday. Best wishes, Sarah.

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I hope this letter find you in sound health.

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change
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meet
 and guide us to the amazing destinations there.

When I was about to book the airplane tickets for us, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 an emergency call from my sister yesterday. She had informed me that my mother has suffered a serious leg injury. And, I cannot neglect my mother's health for enjoyment as she has sacrificed her desires for me.

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leave
 to spend pleasurable time with you at Malaysia. I have also
 booked airplane tickets for both of you.

I hope you understand my situation and forgive me for my absence at the holiday.

Best wishes,

Sarah. 