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You have ordered a book by post. Yet you have not received the book. Write a letter to the bookshop manager. In your letter give details of your order why you need that book urgently what you want them to do now

You have ordered a book by post. Yet you have not received the book. Write a letter to the bookshop manager. In your letter give details of your order why you need that book urgently what you want them to do now kYbbe
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter regarding a book which I ordered in last month. The tittle of the book is 'The ultimate ielts writing book'. The order reference number is 456734WTO. I placed the order online and paid money through credit card. I was promised that book would be arrived within 7 days. However I really want this book urgently because I am preparing for ielts exam. But I am not received my ordered even 25 days. I going to take ielts exam on next month so send my book as soon as possible. Now I am very disappointed with this ordered. You should try to check ordered details if you want the confirmation number, i will send you. Could you send me the dispatches detail because if you are unable to send it then I buy from local bookshop. I hope you understand my problem. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John Terry
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is 'The ultimate
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writing book'. The order reference number is 456734WTO. I placed the order online and paid money through credit card. I
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even 25 days.
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ordered
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if you want the confirmation number,
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me the dispatches detail
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it then I
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buy
from local bookshop. I hope you understand my problem. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours
faithfully
, John
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Terry
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IELTS letter You have ordered a book by post. Yet you have not received the book. Write a letter to the bookshop manager. In your letter give details of your order why you need that book urgently what you want them to do now

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  American English
1 paragraphs
158 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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