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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview E3Lwb
DEAR MR. X MY REASON FOR WRITING IS TO APPLY FOR THE JOB I SAW ADVERTISED ON DAILY STAR ON JULY 15TH. I HAVE BEEN SERVING HOTEL SEAGULL FOR THE LAST TWO AND HALF YEARS AND I SERVE AT THEIR MULTI CUISINE RESTAURANT. AS AN WAITER WITH MULTI CUISINE EXPERIECE HELPS ME TO UNDERSTAND CUSTOMERS NEED VERY WELL. MOST IMPORTANTLY, DUE TO MY EXPERIENCE BASED ON CUSTOMERS NEED I CAN SUGGEST THEM FOOD COURSES THAT CAN BE ENJOYED. FURTHERMORE, I CAN ALSO HELP CHEFS TO GUIDE PREPARE FOODS AS I HAVE TAKEN A COURSE ON CULINARY FROM THE CITY AND GUILDS, UK. ANOTHER THING I MIGHT ADD, I HAVE A TOTAL 5 YEARS OF EXPERIENCE IN THE HOSPITALITY SECTOR, FROM RECEPTIONIST TO KITCHEN CO-ORDINATOR TO WAITER. AND I OFFER MYSELF AS AN EXPERT IN RESTURANT MANAGEMENT AREA. I COULD ATTEND INTERVIEW ON WEEKENDS STARTING FROM SUNDAY 18. ADDITIONALLY, REFERENCES CAN BE FURNISHED UPON REQUEST. I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU. YOURS SINCERELY.
DEAR MR. X

MY REASON FOR WRITING IS TO APPLY FOR THE JOB I
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SAW
ADVERTISED ON DAILY STAR ON JULY 15TH.

I HAVE BEEN SERVING HOTEL SEAGULL FOR THE LAST TWO AND HALF YEARS AND I SERVE AT THEIR MULTI CUISINE RESTAURANT. AS AN WAITER WITH MULTI CUISINE
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EXPERIECE
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HELPS
ME TO UNDERSTAND CUSTOMERS NEED
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VERY
WELL. MOST
IMPORTANTLY
, DUE TO MY EXPERIENCE BASED ON CUSTOMERS NEED I CAN SUGGEST THEM FOOD COURSES THAT CAN
BE ENJOYED
.
FURTHERMORE
, I CAN
ALSO
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
HELP
CHEFS TO GUIDE PREPARE FOODS AS I HAVE TAKEN A COURSE ON CULINARY FROM THE CITY AND GUILDS, UK.

ANOTHER THING I MIGHT
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ADD
, I HAVE A TOTAL 5 YEARS OF EXPERIENCE IN THE HOSPITALITY SECTOR, FROM RECEPTIONIST TO KITCHEN
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CO-ORDINATOR
TO WAITER. AND I OFFER MYSELF AS AN EXPERT IN
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RESTURANT
MANAGEMENT AREA.

I COULD ATTEND INTERVIEW ON WEEKENDS STARTING FROM SUNDAY 18.
ADDITIONALLY
, REFERENCES CAN
BE FURNISHED
UPON REQUEST.

I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU.

YOURS
SINCERELY
.

IELTS letter A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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