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You have rented a car for few days from an agency. However, there are some problems with the car. Write to the agency officer an complain about the rented. I your letter tell him/her the problem of the car. what you want the agency to do now. How you feel about the problem

You have rented a car for few days from an agency. However, there are some problems with the car. Write to the agency officer an complain about the rented. I your letter tell him/her the problem of the car. what you want the agency to do now. How you feel about the problem WyE8b
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to show my dissatisfaction about a car which I hired from your agency in three days before. It is a Ford car. The booking number is 456788WTO. When took in my home it work smoothly. Since next day, the car has been showing some problems. I thought I would be manage with this issue but i did not start it. Presently, car is parked ìn front of my house. I think its need of towed service. Here I want to tell you I had paid you all booking amount in advance. So, I want refund as soon possible. I had hired a taxi to go to office so, I also want a compensation of 50$. This vehicle make my day worse because on that I went to office to attend important meeting with foreign clients. Due to, I was late half hours my boss scolded to me. Next time I shall not hire your service again. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Raj Kumar.
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
my dissatisfaction about a
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car
which I hired from your agency in three days
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before
. It is a Ford
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
. The booking number is 456788WTO.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
took in my home it
Did you mean "works"?
work
smoothly
. Since
next
day, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
has been showing
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some
problems. I
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thought
I would be manage with this issue
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but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
did not
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start
it.
Presently
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
is parked
Possible spelling mistake found.
ìn
front of my
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house
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
its need of towed service. Here I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you I had paid you all booking amount in advance.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I want refund as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
possible. I had hired a taxi to go to office
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, I
also
want a compensation of
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$50".
50$
. This vehicle
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make
my day worse
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
on that I went to office to attend
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important
meeting with foreign clients. Due to, I was late half hours my boss scolded to me.
Next
time I shall not hire your service again. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours
faithfully
, Raj Kumar.
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IELTS letter You have rented a car for few days from an agency. However, there are some problems with the car. Write to the agency officer an complain about the rented. I your letter tell him/her the problem of the car. what you want the agency to do now. How you feel about the problem

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
174 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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