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You have recently Move to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Invite him to stay and suggest a date. briefly ha described the new house And garden. Say why you like your new house

You have recently Move to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Invite him to stay and suggest a date. briefly ha described the new house And garden. Say why you like your new house 0AMyB

Dear Jimmy, I hope you and your family are doing well! I've got good news to tell you that I have newly moved into a house. For a long time we haven't met each other, I thought I'd invite you for a stay in my new house. I'd suggest you come by next week 12th April as we have long weekend leave here and you would be able to spend time with me and my family exploring our new house. The new house is typically what I have dreamed about all the time and it has a spacious living room, 3 bedrooms with a beautiful balcony, play area and a terrace. Also, another best place in the house is our lawn. Mom has built a small farm that has basic ingredients used daily in cooking like red chillies, tomatoes and we have few unusual plants too. My most loved place in my new house is the extra room which I am planning to convert into my workplace because in the morning it has good sunlight and if you spend time there it gives positive vibes throughout the day. I'm eagerly looking forward to your stay in my new house. Warm Wishes, Jack

Dear Jimmy,

I hope you and your family are doing well!

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got
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good
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news
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
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moved
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house
. For a long You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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thought
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new
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house
. I'd suggest you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
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weekend
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leave
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time
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new
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house
.

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house
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 what I have dreamed about all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 and it has a spacious living room, 3 bedrooms with a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 balcony, play area and a terrace.

Also
, another best place in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 is our lawn. Mom has built a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 farm that has basic ingredients This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 daily in cooking like red Possible spelling mistake. 'chillies' is British English.chilies
chillies
, Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).tomatoes, and
tomatoes and
 we have few unusual plants too.

My most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 place in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
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house
 is the extra room which I am planning to convert into my workplace This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 in the morning it has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 sunlight and if you spend You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 there it gives This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 vibes throughout the day.

I'm eagerly
 looking forward to your stay in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
.

Warm Wishes,

Jack