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You have a spare room in your apartment that you would like to rent out to a student. Write a letter to the Student Accommodation Officer of local college. In your letter, you should tell: where your apartment is located when the room will be available what your requirements for a student to stay there are

You have a spare room in your apartment that you would like to rent out to a student. Write a letter to the Student Accommodation Officer of local college. In your letter, you should tell: where your apartment is located when the room will be available what your requirements for a student to stay there are NxR0
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you about a space in my apartment. It is a 2-bedroom apartment, which has 2 washrooms, kitchen and a dining room. It is located at the Kingknoll drive which is 5 min from the college and situated on a very clean and safe street. It has two grocery stores nearby and many food joints such as mc Donald’s, KFC, Burger king etc. I am living with my friend, but she has been offered a job in some other province, so she is moving out next month. My apartment would be available from the month of April. I prefer living with a female student as I would be more comfortable. I am working of some of my very important projects so I would like a quiet environment. There are no special conditions from my side its just that I prefer less noise environment and clean surroundings. The rent would be $2000 including all the utilities. I would request you to refer someone and please feel free to contact me at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully Hargun
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you about a space in my apartment. It is a 2-bedroom apartment, which has 2 washrooms, kitchen and a dining room. It
is located
at the
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Kingknoll
drive which is 5 min from the college and situated on a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
clean and safe street.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
It
has two grocery stores nearby and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
food joints such as
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mc
Donald’s, KFC,
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
Burger king
etc.

I am living with my friend,
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but
she has
been offered
a job in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other province,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
she is moving out
next
month. My apartment would be available from the month of April. I prefer living with a female student as I would be more comfortable. I am working of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
projects
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I would like a quiet environment. There are no special conditions from my side its
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just
that I prefer less noise environment and clean surroundings. The rent would be $2000 including all the utilities.

I would request you to refer someone and
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please
feel free to contact me at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully


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Hargun
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IELTS letter You have a spare room in your apartment that you would like to rent out to a student. Write a letter to the Student Accommodation Officer of local college. In your letter, you should tell: where your apartment is located when the room will be available what your requirements for a student to stay there are

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  American English
6 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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