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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it 8eE5

Dear developer, Recently I read the newspaper and I came to know that you are going to build a new shopping center near my home area. while it is extremely quite area with small shops and departments. I am feeling very surprised to know that. I am happy to have a big shopping mall in my area. In fact I have to face many problems like we have to travel to another city for shopping. I want to know more about like what is the size and structure of building. what are the facilities and shops included in it. one major thing I would request you to have a car parking system in mall which is the biggest problem faced by every people. i am very glad to know these things from you and i hope this center will give more benefits to the people who are living near by. Thank you

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