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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it 8eE5
Dear developer, Recently I read the newspaper and I came to know that you are going to build a new shopping center near my home area. while it is extremely quite area with small shops and departments. I am feeling very surprised to know that. I am happy to have a big shopping mall in my area. In fact I have to face many problems like we have to travel to another city for shopping. I want to know more about like what is the size and structure of building. what are the facilities and shops included in it. one major thing I would request you to have a car parking system in mall which is the biggest problem faced by every people. i am very glad to know these things from you and i hope this center will give more benefits to the people who are living near by. Thank you
Dear developer, Recently I read the newspaper and I came to
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that you are going to build a new shopping center near my home area.
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extremely
quite area with
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small
shops and departments. I am feeling
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surprised to
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know
that. I am happy to have a
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big
shopping mall in my area. In
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problems like we
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travel to another city for shopping. I want to
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know
more about like what is the size and structure of building.
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what
are the facilities and shops included in it. one major thing I would request you to have a car parking system in mall which is the biggest problem faced by every
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people
.
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glad to
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know
these things from you and
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hope this center will give more benefits to the
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people
who are living
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. Thank
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you

IELTS letter You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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