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write a letter to you friend. in you letter eplain why you want to leave your curremt job 2. what kind of job you are looking for. 3. ask for help or advice

write a letter to you friend. in you letter eplain why you want to leave your curremt job 2. what kind of job you are looking for. 3. ask for help or advice AA2w

Dear suman, I am writing this letter to let you know that right now i am working in meat company with a low rate of salary $14 which is not essential to fulfill my basic necessities of life. specially the working environment and I ask my supervisor to increase my pay rate but he is not responding to me as well as there are no any extra privileges given by the company. so I want to leave this job and look for the new one. I am looking for the highly paid job at least $17 per hour with a comfortable surroundings, co-operative staff, paid vacation, bonus and extra health insurance benefits. I hope you will help me to find the best possible job for me to cover the basic needs of my family members. I would like to move in your city just for the sake of new environment and changing regular habits. I know you would suggest me something better for me and reply as soon as possible. thank youRupinder Sahota

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.humanSudanSusansumacsum an
suman
, I am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am working in meat This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 with a low rate of salary $14 which is not essential to fulfill my Consider using "necessities".necessities
basic necessities
 of life. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSpecially
specially
 the working environment and I ask my supervisor to increase my pay rate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he is not responding to me as well
 as there are Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
no
 any extra privileges This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Use a comma before 'so' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short)., so
so
 I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 this job and look for the new one. I am looking for the highly
 paid job at least $17 per hour with a comfortable Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "surrounding"?surrounding
surroundings
, co-operative staff, paid vacation, bonus and extra health insurance benefits. I hope you will In informal texts, 'to' is not necessary. Do you mean "help me find"?help me find
help me to find
 the best possible job for me to cover the basic needs of my family members. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 in your city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 for the sake of new environment and changing regular habits. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 know you would suggest me something better for me and reply as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThank
thank
Possible spelling mistake found.
youRupinder
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphSahota.Sahota!Sahota?Sahota:Sahota,Sahota;
Sahota