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ou work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

ou work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. r9Ap
Dear martin, Recently I become aware of the online training course called social media marketing essentials. this course going to be start on 8th of march i think it is the best opportunity for our company to achieve high goals and profit. this course help to guide the company like how you can create the social websites and attract more online customers at you site. it helps to sell different types of products at different range. it is a five day course. I would like to take this course for our company for the better achievement. I want to take paid leave form 8th to 12th march. If any other member of the company wants to join this course you can reply me in the near future time. this is the best time for me to take this course because this is not usually the busy period. I hope you will understand me and give me the permission to take this course. thank yourupinder sahota
Dear martin, Recently I become aware of the online training
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course
called social media marketing essentials.
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this
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course
going to be
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start
on 8th of march
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think
it is the best opportunity for our
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company
to achieve high goals and profit.
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this
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course
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help
to guide the
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company
like how you can create the social websites and attract more online customers at you site.
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it
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helps
to sell
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different
types of products at
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different
range.
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it
is a
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five day
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. I would like to take this
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course
for our
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company
for the better achievement. I want to take paid
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leave
form 8th to 12th march.
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If
any other member of the
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company
wants to
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join
this
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course
you can reply me in the near future time.
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this
is the best time for me to take this
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course
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because
this is not
usually
the busy period. I hope you will understand me and give me the permission to take this
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course
.
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thank
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yourupinder
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sahota

IELTS letter ou work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

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