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ou work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

ou work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. r9Ap

Dear martin, Recently I become aware of the online training course called social media marketing essentials. this course going to be start on 8th of march i think it is the best opportunity for our company to achieve high goals and profit. this course help to guide the company like how you can create the social websites and attract more online customers at you site. it helps to sell different types of products at different range. it is a five day course. I would like to take this course for our company for the better achievement. I want to take paid leave form 8th to 12th march. If any other member of the company wants to join this course you can reply me in the near future time. this is the best time for me to take this course because this is not usually the busy period. I hope you will understand me and give me the permission to take this course. thank yourupinder sahota

Dear martin, Recently I become aware of the online training You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 called social media marketing essentials. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 going to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 on 8th of march Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is the best opportunity for our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 to achieve high goals and profit. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to guide the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 like how you can create the social websites and attract more online customers at you site. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
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different
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different
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it
 is a When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "five-day"five-day
five day
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course
. I would like to take this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
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company
 for the better achievement. I want to take paid This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 form 8th to 12th march. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 any other member of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 wants to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
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course
 you can reply me in the near future time. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
this
 is the best time for me to take this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 this is not usually
 the busy period. I hope you will understand me and give me the permission to take this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThank
thank
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