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A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday . you are too busy to accept the invitation , write a letter to your friend , in your letter thank him of his invitation, explain why you cannot come ask him about other times to visit

A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday. you are too busy to accept the invitation, write a letter to your friend, in your letter thank him of his invitation, explain why you cannot come ask him about other times to visit g3Kl
Dear Najju, Thank you very much for inviting me to your farmhouse in West Virginia, it’s a great place to explore the rural part of America which I always wanted to experience the countryside, I am afraid that I cannot come this spring as I am struck with a project inching closer to the deadline. Currently, I am being recruited at a design firm and on a probation period which is crucial as my performance would be accessed over the first three months from my joining period. I was given a task to complete the design of a huge project with a specified lead time to complete. with such a huge burden, It is becoming a herculin task to have a work-life balance. Will it be ok if I plan to come In the fall, as it would be a wonderful opportunity to witness the fall colors in the hilly side of Virginia, also we could explore the natural waterfalls in the middle of Yellowstone national park. I cannot wait to hear from you Your friend sami
Dear
Najju
,

Thank you
very
much for inviting me to your farmhouse in West Virginia, it’s a great place to explore the rural part of America which I always wanted to experience the countryside, I am afraid that I cannot
come
this spring as I
am struck
with a project inching closer to the deadline.

Currently
, I am
being recruited
at a design firm and on a probation period which is crucial as my performance would
be accessed
over the
first
three months from my joining period. I was
given
a task to complete the design of a huge project with a specified lead time to complete.
with
such a huge burden, It is becoming a
herculin
task to have a work-life balance.

Will it be ok if I plan to
come
In the fall, as it would be a wonderful opportunity to witness the fall colors in the hilly side of Virginia,
also
we could explore the natural waterfalls in the middle of
Yellowstone national park
.

I cannot wait to hear from you

Your friend

sami
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IELTS letter A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday. you are too busy to accept the invitation, write a letter to your friend, in your letter thank him of his invitation, explain why you cannot come ask him about other times to visit

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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