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You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it g3K3
Dear company representative, While travelling to overseas I bought a beautiful camera from the company named 'CAMERA DESIGNERS'. This company sell different varieties of cameras with numerous features. The quality of the camera is high with imaging colorful pictures. The total cost of camera is $450 with one year of guarantee. I got the closed package from the company. In fact, when I reached at my destination I found that the two items are missing from it. One is battery charger and the second is reels. I am feeling extremely disappointed with the camera. I contact to you because you are the same company in my city which is the second branch of that company. I make a request to you have a replacement of that camera with new one. I hope that I will get the new camera with charger and reels. Thank You
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camera
from the
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company
named 'CAMERA DESIGNERS'. This
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company
sell
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different
varieties of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cameras
with numerous features. The quality of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
camera
is high with imaging colorful pictures. The total cost of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
camera
is $450 with one year of guarantee. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the closed package from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
. In fact, when I reached at my destination I found that the two items are missing from it. One is battery charger and the second is reels. I am feeling
extremely
disappointed with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
camera
. I contact to you
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because
you are the same
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company
in my city which is the second branch of that
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company
.
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I
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make
a request to you have a replacement of that
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camera
with new one.
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I
hope that I will
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get
the new
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camera
with charger and reels. Thank
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IELTS letter You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

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  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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