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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Kaw1
Dear Mr. Smith, Hope you are doing well! My name is Farzan Bhagwagar, I am studing in grade 10. My student ID is 0123456. I am writing this letter to inform you that, I lost my identification card. Yesterday, I was going house in a transit and i lost my wallet in the bus. The bus is full of people so I did not notice it. And my student was inside my wallet with my valueable things. I am facing many dificulty due to this incident. After 3 weeks our exam is going to started and my tutor told me that identity card is necessary to seat in examination. So, I am requesting you to allot me new ID card. If there is any charges to pay, I am willing to pay for it, But I need it before the exams. Kindly please take my request into consideration. Yours Sincerely, Farzan Bhagwagar
Dear Mr. Smith,

Hope you are doing well!

My name is
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Farzan
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Bhagwagar
, I am
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studing
in grade 10. My student ID is 0123456. I am writing this letter to inform you that, I lost my identification card.

Yesterday, I was going
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house
in a transit and
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i
lost my wallet in the bus. The bus is full of
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people
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so
I did not notice it. And my student was inside my wallet with my
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valueable
things. I am facing
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many
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dificulty
due to this incident. After 3 weeks our exam is going to
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started
and my tutor
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told
me that identity card is necessary to seat in examination.
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So
, I am requesting you to allot me new ID card. If
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there is any charges
to pay, I am willing to pay for it,
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But
I need it
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before
the exams.

Kindly
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please
take my request into consideration.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Farzan
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Bhagwagar

IELTS letter You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
151 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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