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Motivation letter for master program

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In each letter we write for a specific topic, we have motive but also we have a big WHY. I start writing this motivation letter to shortly describe my dream, my experience and education background but also I will try to exemplify why this program is practical and suits to me. First of all, I consider myself as combination of calm person which enable me to deep thinking and take best decision; meanwhile as a free spirit in doing what I love which make me acceptable in social and working environment. When I used to think about what being a leader means, I imagined someone extremely skilled and influential, someone who seems just too unattainable. However, recently I have personally come to realize that when there is a will there is a way. This is one of the main reasons why I have decided to take a step into developing my leadership skills. I believe in change. I rely on the option that people, including me as an individual, can change for the better. Working with people who are energetic and enthusiastic about their work makes me motivated, and I want to be one of them. I am someone who is passionate about what I do, and I really want to reflect this more prominently. I think that an opportunity like this not only will help me change in the leadership aspect, but it will also affect those around me who will be experiencing that change. Being part of this program would mean creating a clearer vision of my professional future, and that is something worth working for. I completed my undergraduate studies in Business Administration majoring in Management, Economics and Statistics from Rochester Institute of Technology. The emphasis of my study was to understand the fundamental management principles and economic development techniques with relatedness in statistical data. I read very carefully program focuses which perfectly suit as a future career path since we are living in globalization Era and I highly value it as a process, a career in International Business is highly prospective and required by International Companies; moreover, there is shortage of qualified employees in this field who posses practical and theoretical base. Lately I am working in International company specialized in Vacuum Valves Technology whose changes in technology constantly to maintain its position as global leader and growing in many places to serve clients and fulfill their demands makes me strongly believe that company has shortage of qualified employees in international prospect and this is strong reason to believe that I can be future and potential candidate. I start working from the ground basis to get knowledge how process function practically because I consider it as necessary and then my aim is to promote in another junior position. In past I used to work in different countries and positions leading projects of high working volume with significant amount in financial terms, where my main role were to provide accounting and financial analyses but also, prepare financial statement. This experience required an eager and straightforward personality. I have demonstrated my strategic ability through successfully finishing tasks before deadlines. I gained firsthand experience working in the division of finances and accounting. Lead as a mentor to direct reports related to allocating work, evaluating performance, and rewarding excellence, providing an environment supporting the development of team member. I have been working as Economic professor in Gymnasium “Remzi Ademaj” in Prizren. The main task was to lecture general economics for pupils and strengthen the importance of the economy in their future and professional point of view. In the other hand was great experience dealing with students but also, very challenge since you should prepare lecture, simplify, explain in the manner they understand and it’s interesting for them. Finally, I will have a good chance to share my experience and my culture with different background people from all over the world. Diversity if ideas from different people, since there are people that compete in ideas and there is no single viewpoints/perspective, this would be a good chance to learn more and discuss differentially between our states, culture, work/management styles and habits. Moreover, I am clear-thinking to use this prospect in the best manner for my benefits. Sincerely, Hekuran Maliqaj
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but
also
we have a
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big
WHY. I
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start
writing this motivation letter to shortly
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describe
my dream, my
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experience
and education

background
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but
also
I will try to exemplify why this program is practical and suits to me.

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First of all
, I consider myself as combination of calm person which enable me to deep

thinking and
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take best
decision; meanwhile as a free spirit in doing what I
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love
which
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make
me

acceptable in social and
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working
environment. When I
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used
to
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think
about what being a leader

means, I imagined someone
extremely
skilled and influential, someone
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who
seems
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just
too

unattainable.
However
, recently I have
personally
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come
to realize that when there is a will there is a

way. This is one of the main reasons why I have decided to take a step into developing my

leadership
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skills
. I believe in
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change
. I rely on the option that
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people
, including me as an individual,

can
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change
for the better.
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Working
with
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people
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who
are energetic and enthusiastic about their work

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makes
me motivated, and I want to be one of them. I am someone
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who
is passionate about what I

do, and I
really
want to reflect this more
prominently
. I
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think
that an opportunity like this not
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only
will

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help
me
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change
in the leadership aspect,
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but
it will
also
affect those around me
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who
will be

experiencing that
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change
. Being part of this program would mean creating a clearer vision of my

professional
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future
, and
that is
something worth
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working
for.

I completed my undergraduate studies in Business Administration majoring in Management,

Economics and Statistics from Rochester Institute of Technology. The emphasis of my study was to

understand the fundamental management principles and economic development techniques with

relatedness in statistical data.

I read
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very
carefully
program focuses which
perfectly
suit as a
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future
career path since we

are living in globalization Era and I
highly
value it as a process, a career in International Business is

highly
prospective and required by International
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Companies
;
moreover
, there is shortage of qualified

employees in this field
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who
posses practical and theoretical base. Lately I am
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working
in

International
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
specialized in Vacuum Valves Technology whose
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changes
in technology

constantly
to maintain its position as global leader and growing in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
places to serve clients and

fulfill their demands
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me
strongly
believe that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
has shortage of qualified employees in

international prospect and this is strong reason to believe that I can be
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future
and potential

candidate. I
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start
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working
from the ground basis to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
knowledge how process function
practically


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because
I consider it as necessary and then my aim is to promote in another junior position.

In past I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to work in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
countries and positions leading projects of high working

volume with significant amount in financial terms, where my main role were to provide accounting

and financial analyses
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
, prepare financial statement. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
required an eager and

straightforward personality. I have demonstrated my strategic ability through
successfully
finishing

tasks
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before
deadlines. I gained firsthand
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
in the division of finances and

accounting. Lead as a mentor to direct reports related to allocating work, evaluating performance,

and rewarding excellence, providing an environment supporting the development of team member.

I have been
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working
as Economic professor in Gymnasium “
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Remzi
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Ademaj
” in
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Prizren
. The main

task was to lecture general economics for pupils and strengthen the importance of the economy
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in


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their
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future
and professional point of view. In the other hand was great
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experience
dealing with

students
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but
also
,
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very
challenge since you should prepare lecture, simplify,
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explain
in the manner

they understand and it’s interesting for them.

Finally
, I will have a
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good
chance to share my
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experience
and my culture with
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different


background
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people
from all over the world. Diversity if
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ideas
from
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different
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people
, since there are

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people
that compete in
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ideas
and there is no single viewpoints/perspective, this would be a
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good


chance to learn more and discuss
differentially
between our states, culture, work/management styles

and habits.
Moreover
, I am
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clear
-thinking to
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use
this prospect in the best manner for my benefits.

Sincerely
,

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Hekuran
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Maliqaj

IELTS letter Motivation letter for master program

Letter
  American English
13 paragraphs
707 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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