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Motivation letter for master program

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My name is Alex Hales. I completed a BS in Management from Oxford University. This is my passion to get further education in the field of management. I intend to get this scholarship to prove myself in the field of research. I have a lot of potentials that need to be recognized by a reputed institute. I have been a student of the sciences. I have shown a distinction during my previous educational career. I aspire to get this scholarship so that I can explore new realities and facts in the sciences. This scholarship is significant for my future career as it will lead to continuing my research work having broader exposure in this field. I had been part of different researches. I wrote many theses on different topics such as anthropology, genetics, and entomology during my educational background. My supervisors had always been satisfied with my performance. Importantly, my all researches and thesis had been approved and published by Oxford University. After completion of my degree, I became part of an independent research institute I had been working for more than two years. This scholarship is likely to provide me opportunities to harness new prospects by gaining benefits from further education in a reputed institute. I can make positive changes in this field if I get this scholarship that will help me to develop my research qualities. This scholarship will open new doors for me to get new experiences. I see my future as a researcher. My purpose in getting this scholarship is to meet with new researchers whose work has succeeded in this field. My intention is to learn new things. I intend to get benefit from experienced researchers. If this scholarship is awarded to me, the chances of my bright future in research becomes more likely. I am the best candidate for this scholarship as my work experience and educational background show my passion for this scholarship. I am a candidate you are looking for this scholarship. My perseverance and motivation for work will inspire you to choose me. If you choose me for a scholarship, my research work will get support from this scholarship. I can continue my educational journey with great support. This scholarship will lead me towards the zenith of success in the field of research.
My name is Alex Hales. I completed a BS in Management from Oxford University. This is my passion to
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get
further
education in the
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field
of management. I intend to
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get
this
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scholarship
to prove myself in the
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field
of
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research
. I have
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a lot of
potentials that need to
be recognized
by a reputed institute.
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I
have been a student of the sciences.
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I
have shown a distinction during my previous
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educational
career.

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I
aspire to
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get
this
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scholarship
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so
that I can explore
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new
realities and facts in the sciences. This
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scholarship
is significant for my future career as it will lead to continuing my
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research
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work
having broader exposure in this
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field
. I had been part of
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different
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researches
. I wrote
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many
theses on
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different
topics such as anthropology, genetics, and entomology during my
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educational
background. My supervisors had always
been satisfied
with my performance.
Importantly
, my all
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researches
and thesis had
been approved
and published by Oxford University. After completion of my degree, I became part of an independent
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research
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institute


I had been working for more than two years. This
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scholarship
is likely to provide me opportunities to harness
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new
prospects by gaining benefits from
further
education in a reputed institute. I can
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make
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positive
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changes
in this
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field
if I
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get
this
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scholarship
that will
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help
me to develop my
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research
qualities. This
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scholarship
will open
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new
doors for me to
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get
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new
experiences. I
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see
my future as a researcher. My purpose in getting this
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scholarship
is to
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meet
with
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new
researchers whose
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work
has succeeded in this field.

My intention is to learn
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new
things. I intend to
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get
benefit from experienced researchers. If this
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scholarship
is awarded
to me, the chances of my bright future in
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research
becomes more likely. I am the best candidate for this
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scholarship
as my
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work
experience and
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educational
background
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show
my passion for this
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scholarship
. I am a candidate you are looking for this scholarship.

My perseverance and motivation for
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work
will inspire you to choose me. If you choose me for a
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scholarship
, my
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research
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work
will
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get
support from this
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scholarship
. I can continue my
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educational
journey with great support. This
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scholarship
will lead me towards the zenith of success in the
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field
of
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research
.

IELTS letter Motivation letter for master program

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
382 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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