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You have lost your student identification card.Write a letter to the director of student services.

You have lost your student identification card. Write a letter to the director of student services. GMaVj

Dear Sir /Madam My name is Jack and I am writing this to inform you that I have lost my student identification card while preparing for mock, coming next month. This problem has caught me several issues, such as I am unable to borrow books from the library. As since I am a foreign student, I had to carry my passport to prove my identity as I don't have my I. d card. it takes me to fill 3 pages form to enter in the computer lab which consumes 30 minutes which is a pure waste of my time. frustration does not end here I am being overcharged on the train which has disturbed my appropriation. It's would be most convenient for me to have a student identity card as soon as possible before the start of the final exam to avoid additional issues. I understand a replacement fee is mandatory, In addition to that, as you know from now my timetable is quite hectic I am unable to pick my card from the university, I would appreciate it if you send my I. d card to my registered address. please let me thank you in advance. Looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours affectionately. (Mr. )jack

Dear Sir /Madam

My name is Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Jack, and
Jack and
 I am writing this to inform you that I have lost my student identification You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 while preparing for mock, coming next
 month.

This problem has caught me several issues, such as I am unable to borrow books from the library. As since I am a foreign student, I had to carry my passport to prove my identity as I don't have my I. d You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 takes me to fill 3 pages form to There isn't usually a preposition after "enter". Did you mean "enter the computer"?enter the computer
enter in the computer
 lab which consumes 30 minutes which is a pure waste of my time. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFrustration
frustration
 does not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 here I am being overcharged
 on the train which has disturbed my appropriation.

It's would be most convenient for me to have a student identity You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 of the final exam to avoid additional issues. I understand a replacement fee is mandatory, In addition
 to that, as you know from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 my timetable is quite hectic I am unable to pick my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 from the university, I would appreciate it if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 my I. d You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 to my registered address. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPlease
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me thank you in advance.

Looking forward to hearing from you as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Yours affectionately
.

(Mr.Don't put a space before the closing parenthesis)
 )
jack