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Last weekend, your cousin celebrated the 50th birthday but you couldnt attend and forgot to cancel.

Last weekend, your cousin celebrated the 50th birthday but you couldnt attend and forgot to cancel. jRNDN
Dear Sara, I hope you are doing good! Happy belated Birthday! I am sorry for not attending your birthday. I know it was a Golden year as it was your 50th Birthday. Its been long time we haven’t spoken. As you know, my work demands a lot of my attention and time. I was busy with work and due to some last minute emergency, I was asked to go out of town for some business trip. It all came so sudden that I could not even get time to cancel the RSVP and inform you beforehand. I am back in town now and I will surely make it for you. Let me take you out for Dinner this Saturday. I hope you will understand my situation and accept the invitation. Please forgive me for this. Hope to speak to you soon. Lovingly yours, Udita
Dear Sara,

I hope you are doing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
!

Happy belated Birthday!

I am sorry for not attending your birthday. I know it was a Golden year as it was your 50th Birthday.
Did you mean "It's" (="It has") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Its
been long time we haven’t spoken.

As you know, my work demands
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
my attention and time. I was busy with work and due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
last minute emergency, I
was asked
to go out of town for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
business trip. It all came
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
sudden that I could not even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
time to cancel the RSVP and inform you beforehand.

I am back in town
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
and I will
surely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it for you.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me take you out for Dinner this Saturday.

I hope you will understand my situation and accept the invitation.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
forgive me for this.

Hope to speak to you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Lovingly
yours,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Udita
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IELTS letter Last weekend, your cousin celebrated the 50th birthday but you couldnt attend and forgot to cancel.

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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