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You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend as your replacement. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe the job explain the reason you leave tell him/her why you recommend the job to them

You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend as your replacement. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe the job explain the reason you leave tell him/her why you recommend the job to them kYpbM
Hello Jass Hope you are doing well! I am writing this letter to invite you for replacement of my job, which I am currently doing in Maxtax company. The description of this job is accountant assistant and duties involved such as admin work, tax return and keep the client records. The reason of leaving this job is that I got a job offer from Canda and I am willing to move soon. As I know you have finished your graduation in accounting and this position will be appropriate for you that is why I recommended this job to you. Moreover, the company is offering incredible package with extra super and tax. Also, the location of office is very close to your house. I hope you will think about it and write me back at your earliest convenience. Take care of yourself and looking forward to meeting you soon. Yours Friend Sandeep
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Jass


Hope you are doing well!

I am writing this letter to invite you for replacement of my
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job
, which I am
currently
doing in
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Maxtax
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company
. The description of this
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job
is accountant assistant and duties involved such as admin work, tax return and
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keep
the client records.

The reason of leaving this
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job
is that I
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got
a
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job
offer from
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Canda and
I am willing to
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move
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soon
.

As I know you have finished your graduation in accounting and this position will be appropriate for you
that is
why I recommended this
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job
to you.
Moreover
, the
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company
is offering incredible package with extra super and tax.
Also
, the location of office is
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very
close to your
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house
. I hope you will
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think
about it and write me back at your earliest convenience.

Take care of yourself and looking forward to meeting you
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soon
.

Yours Friend

Sandeep
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IELTS letter You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend as your replacement. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe the job explain the reason you leave tell him/her why you recommend the job to them

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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