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Dissatisfaction letter for complain

Dissatisfaction letter for complain pR3Dm

Dear Sir or Madam For the past 6 years, I have been purchasing and using your mobile phone products and I have been satisfied with the results. However I received a mobile phone manufactored by your company. This letter is to complain about the unsatisfactory service I received when I purchased the A 80 Model from your local branch at the Mini Market. Open the delivery of the product I was founded that it was damaged. It was losing my information which I saved in it and the battery charge is not enough to work. As you know me to use my phone all day but I could not. I was expecting a higher level of service from your company, and I am really dissappointed with how things turned out. This is why I am returning the mobile phone for a full refund or a proper exchange for a new one since the product is still within its warranty period. I have been using many of your products in the past without any trouble. I hope to continue to have a good relationship with your company. I look forward to hearing from you with a resolution to this problem. You can contact me in the following ways. Telephone number: 998935702737 Yours faithfully Julie Brown

Dear Sir or Madam

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phone
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products
 and I have been satisfied
 with the results. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 I received a mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
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manufactored
 by your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. This letter is to complain about the unsatisfactory service I received when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 the A 80 Model from your local branch at the Mini Market. Open the delivery of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 I was founded
 that it was damaged
. It was losing my information which I saved in it and the battery charge is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to work. As you know me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 all day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I could not.

I was expecting a higher level of service from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, and I am really
Possible spelling mistake found.disappointed
dissappointed
 with how things turned out. This is why I am returning the mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 for a full refund or a proper exchange for a new one since the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 is still
 within its warranty period.

I have been using This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 in the past without any trouble. I hope to continue to have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 relationship with your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you with a resolution to this problem. You can contact me in the following ways.

Telephone number: 998935702737

Yours faithfully


Julie Brown