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You want to spend your holiday in the country outside India, where your friends resides. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter right where and when you want to spend holidays why you want to visit when you are planning to visit

You want to spend your holiday in the country outside India, where your friends resides. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter right where and when you want to spend holidays why you want to visit when you are planning to visit 7aQ56
Dear Suzanne,  hope you are fine and enjoying well. I am excited to write this letter as I am planning to visit New York next year, 2021. It’s been long time we have met each other luckily I got a chance from my country to get the visa.  Well, I am coming New York as a part of my business meeting and will be residing in New York from January February. I hope we will have a great time together as before and I will be bringing your favourite snack from Kerala and some home made pickles. Therefore the last weeks for the month of February I will be free so I am planning to visit Niagara Falls. I hope we will have great fun together see you soon. Take care bye yours truly Renu
Dear Suzanne,
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hope you are fine and enjoying well. I
am excited
to write this letter as I am planning to visit New York
next
year, 2021. It’s been long time we have met each other luckily I
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got
a chance from my country to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the visa.  Well, I am coming New York as a part of my business meeting and will be residing in New York from January February. I hope we will have a great time together as
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before
and I will be bringing your
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favourite
snack from Kerala and
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some
home made pickles.
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Therefore
the last weeks for the month of February I will be free
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so
I am planning to visit Niagara Falls. I hope we will have great fun together
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see
you
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soon
. Take care bye yours
truly
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Renu
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IELTS letter You want to spend your holiday in the country outside India, where your friends resides. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter right where and when you want to spend holidays why you want to visit when you are planning to visit

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  American English
1 paragraphs
133 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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