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You want to spend your holiday in the country outside India, where your friends resides. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter right where and when you want to spend holidays why you want to visit when you are planning to visit

You want to spend your holiday in the country outside India, where your friends resides. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter right where and when you want to spend holidays why you want to visit when you are planning to visit 7aQ56

Dear Suzanne, hope you are fine and enjoying well. I am excited to write this letter as I am planning to visit New York next year, 2021. It’s been long time we have met each other luckily I got a chance from my country to get the visa. Well, I am coming New York as a part of my business meeting and will be residing in New York from January February. I hope we will have a great time together as before and I will be bringing your favourite snack from Kerala and some home made pickles. Therefore the last weeks for the month of February I will be free so I am planning to visit Niagara Falls. I hope we will have great fun together see you soon. Take care bye yours truly Renu

Dear Suzanne,Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
hope you are fine and enjoying well. I am excited
 to write this letter as I am planning to visit New York next
 year, 2021. It’s been long time we have met each other luckily I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a chance from my country to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the visa.  Well, I am coming New York as a part of my business meeting and will be residing in New York from January February. I hope we will have a great time together as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and I will be bringing your Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.favorite
favourite
 snack from Kerala and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 home made pickles. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 the last weeks for the month of February I will be free This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I am planning to visit Niagara Falls. I hope we will have great fun together This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Take care bye yours truly
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Renu

IELTS letter You want to spend your holiday in the country outside India, where your friends resides. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter right where and when you want to spend holidays why you want to visit when you are planning to visit

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

133 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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